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Distance does not make the heart grow fonder
Discontent to be alone, it will wander
Finding new homes
Among another's flesh

The ultimate betrayal:
An iron will grew soft.

Time tugs at the seams
Until there is no longer an us
And only I remain
Surrounded by the shells of what used to be

Logic tells us we will heal
The wound becomes a scab
Becomes a scar
Fading against the backdrop of our skin

Sometimes forgotten...
Usually not

You aren't much to me now:
An ambush of thoughts as I try to fall asleep
And though I carry you with me wherever I go
The load has finally begun to lessen
©2006-2009 ~prettyinpain
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Author's Comments

I was looking through my journal today and found a poem that I had started the day after Chrstmas but was never able to finish. I took another crack at it and I'm actually pleased with what it turned into.

The moral of the story? Write everything down.

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:iconwein:
this is great dude!!! +fav

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:iconwein:
this is great dude!!! +fav

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am an analphabet!!! so either shoot me or hug me... ;)
then if u are a daria fan just join ~DARIA-FANCLUB
Mauritians join ~m0ris
And poetry facinated ones:
*RawEm0tion and ~burn-p0etry
:iconwaiting-for-godot:
bravo! :clap: i love reading your poems Ashleigh because they have something beautiful in them i don't know
i like it :)

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Impossible! :confused:

:gallery: I’m an artist, not a philosopher.
:iconprettyinpain:
Thank you! And thank you again for the fav :)

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I love my baby!
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Thank you... I'm really proud of this poem. I feel like it's good throughout the whole thing, not just in certain places like my other ones.

:heart:

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I love my baby!
:iconwaiting-for-godot:
all of them hit the spot :)

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Impossible! :confused:

:gallery: I’m an artist, not a philosopher.
:iconwein:
u deserve it! ;)

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am an analphabet!!! so either shoot me or hug me... ;)
then if u are a daria fan just join ~DARIA-FANCLUB
Mauritians join ~m0ris
And poetry facinated ones:
*RawEm0tion and ~burn-p0etry
:iconglarawen:
Wow. Awesome!! Did I not watch you the other day? I meant to. Must remember to do it now, your poetry is awesome.

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Fuck me harder. No harder. Make me cry.
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Well thank you very very much :)

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I love my baby!

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